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A Rhymed Whitney

A chapter in the book NaPoWriMo 2019

The Perfect Gift

by Debra White



Mum and Dad
so gen'rously,
chose my gift
so thoughtfully;
Night away,
just Shaun and me -
What a lovely luxury!


 




It was my birthday a couple of days ago. (I know, you know!)

My amazingly thoughtful parents have booked a night away for my husband Shaun and I, at a very fancy restaurant (Winteringham Fields - check it out online!) Proud sister alert...! My little brother, Gaz, just so happens to be head chef :)

Anyway, tonight is the night (whoop!) Mum and dad are looking after our children (and Molly the dog!) and will also have Sunday lunch ready for us when we get back tomorrow!

A little us-time is just what we need and I feel so blessed :)

A Whitney is a seven line poem with a syllable count of 3/4/3/4/3/4/7 respectively.

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