Spiritual Poetry posted March 13, 2019


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He warms my young soul

My Neighbor Sol Visits Me Daily

by Mark D. R.

if I'm sick or not,
ol' Sol visits me daily --
he warms my young soul



Senryu writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a Senru. A poem that follows the five, seven, and five syllable count (5, 7, 5). 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions.


In Romance languages, 'sun' is a masculine noun. So 'Sol' (short for Solly or Solomon? - LOL), an older man, looks in on his younger neighbor on a daily basis. Usually, the opposite occurs.
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