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Let it Go! (A)

by Ricky1024


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"Let it Go!" (A)
Written on March 11th, 2019
By Doctor Ricky1024
Copyright C. FanStory 2019
"All Rights Reserved"

"When the pains remain and get so, so, very bad?"
when it makes you feel so "Knife in your chest that continues to stab?"
"And, it gets so very, very, sad?"
"When it builds and it turns into Hate and now your controlled by something you don't understand like Fate?"
"And, your family and friends say they know?"
"Let it Go."
...
"When your Shitty World turns Upside Down?"
"When life suddenly feels like it's smashed into the ground?"
"See no Evil...
"Speak no Evil...
"But all you ever feel is Evil all around?"
"Your family and friends say it isn't so?"
"Let it Go. "
...
"When you're so, so, lost you'll never again be found?"
"When you no longer can eat or sleep at night?"
"And, you exist by the thought that soon everything will be alright?"
"But your suddenly losing so much weight?"
"And, daily routine now seems more like a nightmare than a dream?"
"Your death is posted in LIFE Magazine?"
"Tired of the wish washy in your Washing Machine?"
"Do you know what I mean?"
"You try to believe that your family and friends say it isn't so?"
"Let it Go. "
...
"When you can no longer navigate and your sail lost it's wind?"
"When your World comes crashing down and it gets so, so, bad you start hitting yourself and fooling around?"
"Contemplating Suicide?"
"And, it now becomes your only thoughts of relief?"
"You can no longer even button your shirt from the mounting Grief? "
"You get out of bed because of the pounding Misery in your head?"
"Wake up each morning but pray to the Lord and wish you were dead!"
"When all these things and more are now coming in your front door?"
"Eight by Ten pictured memories of the past?"
"That eerie and scary voice that always laughs?"
"And, finally?"
"You've had enough?"
"Nobody really understands?"
"God does, don't you know?"
"And, it's finally time to just...
"Let it Go?"

"Just Dream" (B)
Written on March 11th, 2019
"When your saddened Life gets you down?"
"When the thoughts abound in your sick head?"
"Spinning round and around?"
"When your World Turns Upside Down?"
"And, things no longer seem?"
"Just Dream!"
...
"When it seems as if even God has turned His back on ye?"
"The dog just ate your only plate of spaghetti?"
"Girlfriend keeps fooling around?"
"Your business partners just scheme?"
"Just Dream!"
...
"When suddenly you lost the most precious thing?"
"When even the Hope Diamond is just now a carbon copy...
"On a finger as Elizabeth Taylor's ring?"
"The Angels above forgot how to sing?"
"Even your very, own, mother steals your, very, last...
"Red Cent?"
"And, you're now Hell-bent on ending it all?"
"No more sugar for your coffee and cream?"
"Just Dream?"
...
"When even your Four, very, own, daughter's no longer come over to be?"
"And, you want Not To Be?"
"Nothing on now but boring videos on MTV?"
"You're at the end of your rope and The Noose is tightening fast?"
"Heads racing as your car no longer runs and ran out of gas?"
"Lost the Son, Lost the Wife?"
"Suns light no longer lasts?"
"Surrounded by Darkness of Past?"
"All these things and more as hard as it all may seem?"
"There's Hope if you can...
"Just Dream?"

"When You Just Dream?" (C)
Written on March 11th, 2019

"When You Just Dream?"
"It seems all your nightmares go away?"
"No more rainy but now Sunny of day?"
"Rainbows appear, Winters gone and Spring is close but not yet here?"
"Well then when you just Dream It's Friday and Monday is just a past blur!"
"That cat you almost lost again begins to Purr?"
"Broken watch begins to tick?"
"That pot of molasses ain't now quite so thick?"
"When you just dream Demons of your past can no longer grasp!"
"Happiness now will always and forever Last...
"Sweet cream replaces this Soured Past...
"Connective Ability, Yo-Yo Strings, Rubber bands stretch to the Extreme?"
"No so when you just Dream!"
...
"Turnovers caught in your frying pan?"
"Just lost your best friend named Dan?"
"Damn!"
"Mommy tries and tries but can't seem and just cries?"
"Cause dad gave up and drank himself to death?"
"Took away your last breath?"
"And, you feel it's now your time?"
"No more God to pray?"
"Yes, all is lost it all now seems?"
"But it all can go away...
"When You Just *Dream?"
Approximate Word Count: 783.




*Dream:
n. unconscious thoughts, peaceful sleep, at rest.
"These three pieces are based on Lost and then Found Hope and Faith. "
"In order to understand this pain on loss you need to experience...
Journal and post as you eliminate."
Carolyn Ann Richmond Harbach Smrkovsky
December 6th, 1952-
November 26th, 2003
Jason Richard Smrkovsky
November 5th, 1984-
March 31st, 2003
Organs Donated on April 1st, 2003
(April Fool's Day)
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"To learn more about...
'Organ-Tissue Donations?'
"Simply contact my dear, friend Lara. S. Moretti the L.S.W. with...
'The Gift of Life!'
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania at...
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...
"And, thanks from the very bottom of my and my Son Jason's donated Heart...

"Special thanks goes out first, as always, to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ."
"Followed by Fanstory and Tom the Administrator."
"Fan Art Review, this Amazing as well as Talented Artist and Gifted Writer, Doctor. Ricky 1024."
""And, his Incredible picture, "Paradise Lost"
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