General Poetry posted February 6, 2019 | Chapters: | ...144 145 -146- 147... |
Petrarchan Rhymes
A chapter in the book Commentary and Philosophy
Time Machine
by Treischel
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This story poem is just a fantasy I often think about. Wouldn't it be cool if a garage could become a time machine, and anything in it would travel with you in what amounts to a pod? Of course you'd have to carefully plan each trip to the past, as it wouldn't be too good to run out of gas in the Jurassic, where there are no roads or gas stations.
This poem is structured like a Petrarchan Sonnet, with alternating Octaves and Sestets. All the Octaves are rhymed as:
abbaabba,
while the Sestets are varied as:
cdecde, and cddcdc.
The meter was mixed between 10 and 11 syllabic feet.
This photograph is of a clock in our playroom that was taken by the author himself on February 6, 2019.
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and 2 member cents. This poem is structured like a Petrarchan Sonnet, with alternating Octaves and Sestets. All the Octaves are rhymed as:
abbaabba,
while the Sestets are varied as:
cdecde, and cddcdc.
The meter was mixed between 10 and 11 syllabic feet.
This photograph is of a clock in our playroom that was taken by the author himself on February 6, 2019.
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