General Poetry posted January 4, 2019 Chapters:  ...71 72 -73- 


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Awdl Gwydd

A chapter in the book Minnesota Poems

Cathedral Upon the Hill

by Treischel

 

This church sits upon a hill.
It’s still highest in St. Paul,
which overlooks the city.
Integrity overall!
 
Center of the Holy See,
meant to be the Bishop’s chair,
presiding flamboyantly
to free us from all despair.
 
We are grateful that it’s there,
a prayer in marble stone,
reminder of our true goal
to save our soul, sins atone.
 
We are grateful that it’s there!


 




This is the Cathedral of St. Paul in Minnesota. It does sit on the highest point in the city, overlooking the town.

This poem is an Awdl Gwydd.
The Awdl Gwydd (pronounced like: owdle gow-widd) is a Welsh poetic format made up of quatrains with a specific rhyme scheme that repeat the end-rhyme of the first and third line as an inline rhyme in the second and fourth. It's important to state that Celtic poetry is based on sound structures to make them easy to remember, with rhyme not as important as repetition, alliteration and rhythm.
Each stanza is a quatrain of seven syllables. Lines two and four rhyme rhyme with each other; lines one and three cross rhyme to form the inline rhyme into either the second, third, fourth, OR fifth syllable of lines two and four. So the rhyme scheme of each stanza becomes:
a, (a,b), c, (c,b),
where the lines in parens represent the inline-endline rhyme structure. For example, below I show two stanza layouts where the Xs are just syllables and the letters show the rhyme. The first stanza has the cross rhymes in the third syllable. The second stanza has them in the fifth.
x x x x x x a
x x a x x x b
x x x x x x c
x x c x x x b
x x x x x x d
x x x x d x e
x x x x x x f
x x x x f x e
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