Self Improvement Poetry posted November 23, 2018 Chapters:  ...19 20 -21- 22... 


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Haiku / Lanterne suite on leaving my mark

A chapter in the book Haiku and Senryu Suites

To Change The World

by Badger_29


"Music became a healer for me. And I learned to listen with all my being. I found that it could wipe away all the emotions of fear and confusion relating to my family"
X

I am learning to 
utilize my time better
to accomplish more

I put into play
an attainable series
of goals and projects 

taking care to think
of redundancy and chance
with alternatives

this way of planning
accomplishes more quickly
this list of items

because I can do
all this more efficiently
more time is made free

with more time to use
I am pleased that I had time
to write this all down

now that I've written
and you have been absorbing 
I can share this thought

if I can reach out
to share this conservation
it gains even more

when this is ready
to be seen in succession
I have left my mark

even if just one
reads this and incorporates
I can claim my fame

but we can deduce
that the more people exposed
Leaves a bigger mark


Y


All 
wish to 
leave their mark 
in history.
Write 

Some 
will make
a bigger 
mark than others.
Fame

All
have an
impact on our 
Society.
Thanks!

That
which you

have written
has certainly 
helped!

X

if you truly wish
to have an impact on more,
try 
writing larger

That was intended 
to be a layered punny  
ending out funny

By "writing larger",
i meant larger everything;
words, themes, thoughts and deeds

you may have got that
without my explanation
but, you see it fit 

communication
is the one true solution 
that IS specific

specificity 
Is the most appropriate 
way to explain All

(by "All", I meant this:
explain the variables 
of your equation-


This will enable
your audience to leave with

the bigger picture)
 



Recognized


Thanks to Google for the image, which includes lyrics from Eric Claptons song,
Change the world. The quote on top is also by this powerful and prolific musician. He Has changed the world!

"One of the most beneficial things I've ever learned is how to keep my mouth shut." Eric Clapton



X and Y represent the chromosomes in our DNA. Male DNA has an X Y combination, and Y Y is the Female combination.

Lanturne poetry consists of
1, 2, 3, 4, 1 syllables.
I have found that writing in this manner helps me to condense my thoughts, thereby conserving time, space, and energy; this being a prime example of the subject of which I am conveying~

~Peace~

Brother Badger
Friday, November 23 2018
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