General Script posted November 15, 2018


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Smuckatelly Strikes Again

by Earl Corp

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Sgt Corp, can I ask you a question?

You just did Private Smuckatelly, but go ahead.

Would I get into trouble if I called Captain Brown an asshole?

You know you would, that's disrespectful and insubordinate. You'd be looking at jail time.

Okay, would I get into trouble for thinking Captain Brown's an asshole?

We can't control what you think, you know that Smuckatelly.

Ok ,cool! HEY, CAPTAIN BROWN, I THINK YOU"RE AN ASSHOLE

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