Fantasy Poetry posted November 5, 2018


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A Tanka poem

Tanka(made from candle wax)

by Pamusart

buildings start to melt
scorched by unforgiving sun;
colored tallows fall
as the city drips hot wax,
and begins to disappear.



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I wanted to portray a city made from wax that starts melting. It seemed like a good idea at the time.

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Painting be me. Oil on canvas
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