Fantasy Poetry posted October 18, 2018 Chapters: 3 4 -5- 6... 


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A chapter in the book Fragmentation

The Dreams of Commuters

by estory

On the railroad station platforms
Where the daydreaming commuters wait,
Carried off each by his own daydream
Of snow covered railroad station platforms,
Championship football games,
Music, naked statues, silence

One follows one's own daydream,
And in it, the railroad trains begin to travel west,
And off to the west, across the river,
Over the expanses of bridges
And under the lengths of tunnels

The city they are going to sparkles in the river,
Its lights glittering like so many faces, so many voices,
Like so many people walking along the boulevards
Or talking up in the rooms of little apartments
Under the gargoyles of the townhouses
That seem like the dreams of the people inside them,

And we, in our dreams, forget who we were
And why we came here and where we came from,
And we walk arm in arm with people going to concerts,
Art museums, sidewalk cafes, theatres,
Looking up at the white spires of St. Patrick's Cathedral,
Or the Christmas tree in Rockefeller Center,
Where the skaters skate into their pirouettes



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This poem tries to capture all of those millions of daydreams we have daydreamed while commuting to work in those great cities; in this case, of course, New York. I tried to let the architecture and the bustle of the city take you away into the little corners and into the lives of the individuals in the crowds behind the faces you see on the subway trains, along the streets, and it ends with that open ended uplifting image of the skaters on the skating rink, their dance lifting the dream into all kinds of possibilities. It is more than anything, a poem of hope estory
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