Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted September 10, 2018 Chapters:  ...20 21 -22- 


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A chapter in the book A Torn Life

Muddled Mind

by Bucketlist

Help me
I was trapped
I didn't know why
I went to the hospital
They wouldn't let me leave
I could hear them whispering
So many voices talking together
Weird faces laughing and pointing at me
But it was too hard to try understanding them
I tried explaining that I had an 'out of body' experience
I didn't need help, I was in a peaceful place not known to me
My soul departed and just as I rose up I felt a needle in me I blacked out




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