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Slivers of Ice! (ChapterNumberTwo)

by Ricky1024


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"Slivers of Ice!"
Written on June 30th, 2018
By Doctor Ricky 1024
Chapter Number One
(The Beginning of the End!)

Cast of Characters:
Dr.Ricky 1024
Megan
Katey
The Grim Reaper of Death
Old Man (The Gate Keeper)
Bartender Stone
Teacher
Satan
Heavenly Father
Jesus Christ
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"Icy Chills acknowledge my presence now. "
"And, my time has come."
"I must move forward?"
"Reflections of my past Life...
"No more Son...
"And, no more Wife...
"It plagues me...
"Persuades me...
"My Captured Spirit is slowly passed away?"
...
"Oh Lord!"
"Sp much for another...
'Sunny Day?'
"Is there something wrong with me?"
"Is this it or is there more?"
"It's over now and my Life is now Complete?"
"System Overload...
"Next stop?"
"The Twilight Zone I now seek!"
...
"Ah...
"Yes!:
"For just one more moment with *Rod!"
"There was a man who knew how to do his job!"
"I can still hear His message...
"So, next time try the 'Smooth Sensation of 'Lucky Strike!"
"As he demonstrated his ware!"
"But, he was really saying...
"Smoke, Lucky Strike as I did?"
"And, you will, die soon like I will!"
"But Rod!"
"I'm already there!"
...
"Oh!"
"I can see my Destruction and Destination!"
"Oh look!"
"It's..
'The Grim Reaper of Death!'
"And, like Rod...
"He will take away...
"Your very, last, Breath!"
...
"Wanna ride?"
He Asks.
Well, I'm not sure?"
I Reply.
"A question?"
"Who are you and why am I here?"
"The odor is Noxious!"
I Complain.
...
"I'm your travel guide!"
"We are going on a 'Caribbean cruise!"
He States.
"In this?"
I Ask.
...
"I guarantee you will like it where we are going."
He States.
"Here, take these 'Two, Gold, Coins and put them over your eyes."
He Instructs.
"After about an 'Eternity,' we arrive?"
...
"Hey kid!"
"Wake the Fuck up!"
Yells Grim.
"Are we here yet?"
I Ask.
Last stop HADES!"
He Answers.
...
Note:
"The view here is HADES is Stupendous!"
"But, so much noise and sufferings!"
...
"As I approach...
'The Gates of Hell,.'
"An, 'Old Man' greets me?"
...
"He calls himself...
'The Gate Keeper.'
"So, I tell him my name and he replies...
"Welcome to Hades Mother Fucker!"
"You messed up!"
"We heard about you!"
"The Priest with the Least!"
He Laughs.
...
"You tried to kill yourself in 2003."
"Lost the Son and Wife, huh?"
"Right?"
"I answer unexpectedly to this Creep!"
...
"Gate Keeper?"
"I thought...
'The Suicide Thing' was changed?"
I Ask.
"Changed from 'Heaven to Hell?"
I Wonder.
...
"A Fucking Myth!"
"It will always and forever be this way stupid!"
"At least I earned my 'Ticket here the right way!"
He States.
"And, what would that be?"
I Ask.
"Murder and Rape!"
Replies.
"And, this is my 'Penance' to greet Ass Holes like you!"
...
"You see, we need more Dead Ass Holes like you!"
"Satan is busy and needs 2 'Suicide Victims!"
"We have only been getting 'Heroin Overdoses,' lately."
He States.
...
"Did the, 'Reaper give you the 'Gold Coins?'
"Yes, two."
I Reply.
"I need one to let you pass."
"You can keep the other but don't waste it."
"It may save your 'Lousy Ass' someday."
...
"I pass through and further on down the path, the more noxious and louder it gets?"
"The Screaming is horrid!"
"Am I dreaming?"
I Wonder.
End of Chapter Number One.
...
Chapter Number Two
"Hell Hath No Fury Like A Woman!"
Written on July 1st, 2018
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"After what seemed weeks, I finally arrived at my destination."
"And, along the way, I met some many, as well as, 'Interesting Characters?'
...
"Hey Adolf!"
"How you doing?"
I Wondered.
"Not good!"
"Can you get these..
'Jew Mother Fuckers' off me?"
"Can't help you with that Adolf!'
"What goes around, gets around!"
"Then I saw 'Attila the Hun?'
"His head on a post that read...
"This way!"
"Follow My Head to Purģatory!"
"There were also, a couple of
Serial Killers?"
"Jeffery Dalmer and Ted Bundy!"
"They were entertaining 'Demon Cannibals!'
...
"I even saw 'Bin?'
"Bin Ladin!"
"He was praying to Mohamad as all the 9~11
Victims! Would take turns torturing him!"
"And then I saw She?"
...
"She calls herself...
'Honey Baby?'
"I can't believe the Demons in Hell!"
"This Red Head was HOTT!"
...
"She Asked me if I still had a 'Gold Coin?'
"I Replied...
"Yup!"
"She said...
"Lets go!"
"How could I not?"
"The Best Damned Sex that I ever had!"
"And boy, was glad but theres this 'Strange Rash'on my 'Happy Area?'
"Wonder if they have any CVS's in Hell?"
...
"Then, I saw it!"
"HELL!"
"And, it was Massive!"
"Ingeniously built!"
"All iut if 'Human Bones and Skulls?"
"I saw other strange things too!"
"Surrounding the structure was an Iron Gate but larger then the previous one!"
"And, the gates were moaning?"
"I swear they were saying...
"Go Away!"
...
'After entering Hell, I noticed that it was kinda warm?"
"Not too Hot?"
"That's when some beggar asked me for a 'Gold Coin!'
"I said that I had spent it in 'An Angel.'
"He Replies.
"That was no Angel!"
"That was Satan testing you!"
"Did nd you learn in 'Bible School ad a kid that Satan takes on many Disguises!"
"I threw up!"
End of Chapter Number Two!
Chapter Number Three...
"A Day at Club Med?"
A Little later.
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'MKFlood,' and his incredible picture...
"Twilight Zone at Crossroads"
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