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A Children's Fairytale.

A chapter in the book "Shed Many More Tears, Fairytales F

Lollipops and Licorice Sticks(Concl)

by Ricky1024

"Lollipops and Licorice Sticks (Conclusion)
Written on February 21st, 2018
By Doctor Ricky 1024
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"Once Upon a Time in 'Lollipop and Licorice Stick Land.'
"There lived two families...
"The Lollies and the Licorice Families."
...
"The Lollies we're constantly going around and licking things?"
"That they shouldn't be licking you see?"
"So, 'The Candy God.'
(Decided one day)
"That he was going to punish the Lollipop Family and reward the Licorice Family?"
"And, that is where our Fairytale begins...
...
"Once Upon a Time in the Candyland...
"The Lollipop Family was crying?"
...
"Why are you crying Larry?"
Asked Lolly.
'The Candy God' punished me and my family!"
...
"And, welcome back FanStory reviewers to another edition of "Shed Many, More, Tears, Fairy tales and Fables!"
"And, this is Annie Oakley!"
"The Greatest Female Sharpshooter West of this Dem Der Mississippi River!"
"And, I'm here to narrate as well as present this newest Fairytale by Doctor Ricky 1024 entitled...
"Lollipops and Licorice Sticks."
...
"And, since this evening it is snowing now in South Jersey."
"Ricky said that he will have to continue this tomorrow?"
"Boo Hoo!"
"I know but when you all wake up on the 21st...
"Ye all reviewers will get a pleasant surprise!"
Annie.
"Lollipops and Licorice Sticks."
(Conclusion)
"Once Upon A Time in 'Candy Land there lived a Family named...
'The Lollipops.'
...
"Whoa!"
"Hold dem, der, britches!"
Worries Annie.
"What happened to... 'The Licorice Stick Family.'
"Ricky?"
"Well Annie, I'm getting to that!"
(Annie grabs a box of Kleenex)
...
Note: 'The Candy God'is a 'Notty Baddy!"
"Dad?"
Yes Son?
"How much?"
"How much longer?"
"How much longer are we going to be 'Packaged?'
Asks Larry Licorice Stick.
"Well Larry, I guess til some Human buys us?"
Replays Dad.
...
Note: "They have been packaged by the company called 'Nicco.'
...
(The Dad starts to cry?)
"Daddy, please, please, Pretty, Pretty, Please...
"Don't do it!"
(Dad's having a Horrible Nighmare again...
...
"Dad?"
Yes Larry?
"Don't be a scared."
"I'm praying tonight for us."
...
"Nightfall rolls in like a Drunken sailor."
"Blackened Clouds roll in over 'Candy Land?"
"The Purple Clouds start to cry and 'Rivers of Grief' cloud up and
Bring little relief?"
"It's as if 'The Candy God'is punishing only me?"
"Realizes Larry."
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"Special thanks goes out first to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus the Christ, FanStory and Tom the Administrator, Fan Art Review, this amazing as well as talented artist...
'booklooto,' and their incredible picture...
"Remember the Lollipop"
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