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free verse in couplets and stanzas

A chapter in the book Word Games

Ocean Dreams

by estory

I

Depths. Echoes.
Long fathoms
Down, pearl
And coral beds

Harden in my ears,
While light,
Airborn, weaves patterns
Above me.

Beyond me.

II

Night.
I become the undercurrents of
Ocean dreams.

Ocean dreams:
Sunlight and water
Moving without form
Over the surface of waters.

Clear waters.
Deep down,
A dark shape
Rising from below.

III

Long, white
Scrimshawed bone
Dream
Of women in long dresses
Sitting at windows embroidering

Doves
Flying to the men
On the open ocean.

A lady's face.
A moonless night.
A widowed woman.

IV

Always, I return to the sea.
Salt and water,
Thick as blood,
Deep as the mind

Lidded in sleep
Follows moon
And tide
In its migrations.

Inland, I follow turtle tracks
Down from a hilltop
Into the water.
One day, I will not come back.







Coming from Long Island, I have deeply ingrained love of the sea, its rhythms and music seem to constantly rise and fall in my soul, and the pull of the moon on the ocean, forming the tides, seems like an underlying force in my spirit. This poem speaks of the subconscious, the desires and fears lurking in it, the distances in life, between lovers, and the earth shaking magnetic pull of these forces in life. The ocean stands as a metaphor for these forces, and the rhythm of waves underpins the rhythm of the language here. I think the sea is a big part of our subconscious, probably having to do with the dimly remembered breathing of our mothers when we were in the womb, which the rising and falling sound of the waves on the shore, in their rhythmic constancy, seems to emulate. It has a calming effect on us, and we can't get enough of it. estory
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