Commentary and Philosophy Non-Fiction posted December 30, 2017 Chapters: 1 2 -3- 4... 


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My thoughts on the Ultimate Gift.

A chapter in the book Puncturing Reality

Hope

by Ricky1024

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Background
Follows with another amazing journey.
"Hope"(A)
Written on December 30th, 2017
By Doctor Ricky 1024.
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"My Life as it used to be...
"As it was before thee...
"My Horrid and Disturbed Life of Me...
"Is now more or less...
"Lord, can't You see?"
...
"My Dreams are all just catalogued Mutilated Nighmares out of Order?"
"Distressed selections of...
"Baby, Do You Have a Clue?"
...
"No more shall I be Fully Able and Capable to do...
"What I now must do which is Die?"
...
"Punctured Reality is Crystal Clarity of Deppression mixed with *Pain!"
"You simply suck on a Vein and ...
"Heroin it all the Fuck Away!"
"A Bad Acid Trip?" (B)
Written on December 30th, 2017.
By Tim Squindo
"My head fell off like a heavy Boulder, even to my collar bones and shoulders"
"My Blood filled up in my body. like a cyst."
"She wanted to suck it like a fake kiss"
...
"Then my nose cracked like a lightning Bolt!"
"I felt the electricity go from my mouth to my throat, my ribs cracked open, MY chest caved in, you can see my Heart pounding like a beast from within!"

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"My veins started to bulge, my nerves started to shake, I tried to take a breath, I!couldn't even take"
"My lungs collasped."
"You Didn't see?"
"They went from my chest, to my stomach, to my knees!"
"My shins snapped, my bones became bristle and brittled."
"I'll let you decide;
"What happened to the girl whom was called...
"Stencil."

Approximate Word Count: 264.







*Pain:
"Depression... "Severe and Chronic Depression... "Depression with Severe and Chronic Psychotic Syndrome."
"Special thanks goes out first to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus the Christ, FanStory and Tom the Administrator, Fan Art Review, and this amazing and talented artist...
'Raoul'DHarmental'
and his incredible picture...
"Narcissus and Echo"
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by Raoul D'Harmental at FanArtReview.com

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