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A chapter in the book The Book of Fine Poetry

House at the End of the Street 2020?

by Ricky1024


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"House at the End of the Street Street 2020?"(D)
(COMING UP FROM THE GRAVE!)
Written on November 27th, 2017
By Doctor Ricky 1024.
"Coming to a house near YOU?"
Character List:
John Burns Senior and his wife Kelly
John Burns Jr and his wife Nancy
Detective Martin Truex and various Victims.
...
Note:
"For those who have not read the three, previous, parts of this amazing book...
"This amazing book that a reviewer here...
(Liberty Justice)
'Said and I quote...
This is do,wonderfully done."
"And, it should become a Hollywood movie!"
"Hollywood!!!
"Hollywood!!!
"Hollywood!!!
...
"Upcat...
"It is 1954 and John Burns was born."
"He grew up and was basically abused and ignored?"
(Shut the door!)
"And, he turned his intentions towards helpless animals?"
....
"Now, when he got older, he stopped torturing animals and dissecting them?"
"To see how they worked and what made them, "Tick?"
...
"He marries and produced the family of two children."
(A boy and a girl)
"Life seems okay for a while for John but something was drastically wrong with him?"
"You see, he had a taste for Death!"
"And, presented ir!"
...
"Now for the shocking end of the first book...
"House at the End of the Street!"
....
"After he slaughtered his own wife and two children, he comes home from a hard day of work."
"And, that was when he notices that there's no electric in his house?"
"He stumblestrips, and falls over a chair as he's trying to see...
"See, with this, little, flashlight on a keychain."
"He then realizes he has a cell phone?:
"So, as he gets his cell phone working, he stumbled again!"
"This time over his dead wife!:
...
"Investigators...
(A male and a female).
"Both get deeper into this and in the shocking twist ending...
"I have him as being the actual serial killer!"
...
"Now, many, years passed but John takes a second family?"
"Which he does the same thing?"
...
"Now the reader does not know this till later."
"That he doe re-marrie and this time...
"One of the children survives?"
"And, that's when we get more into the present and Errie World of would be John Junior thed Serial Killer?"

****
"John Jr. Is plagued and tortured by the memories...
"Memories of somebody...
"And, being a baby..
"He remembers nothing?"
...
"And, this incredible story continues to move first forward...
"Then backward?"
"As it plagues him in high school!"
...
"So, he moves from various towns to get away from it."
"And, when he finally grows up...
"And takes on his own family...
"He comes back to Edison where he gets a job at 'Twin County Grocers" in charge of the unloading of pallets from the various, tractor, trailers...
...
"Being a drinker instead of a thinker, he loses that job."
...
"So, he decides to drown his recent woes at "The Kit Kat Tap Room."
"And, his wife then divorces him!"
...
"Now he's homeless, getting divorced, no job nor income...
"And, not able to be around his children...
...
After driving his car to the tap room, he then parks the card and starts walking."
'Ve goes into the 'Edison Park,' where he sees a jogger."
...
Note:
"In the first part of this which is...
"House at the End of the Street 2020!"
"He befriends rhat jogger...
"That younger sister...
"And, she wants nothing to do with him?"
"After three loops, he eventually kills her!"
(Guts and deciminarws her).
....
"Now supporters...
"This is where we go deeper into the book...
...
"John didn't find another jogger...
"And, does the same thing to weeks later...
"But this woman is obly stabbed twice and miraculously survives?"
"Now, there wasn't a witness but rhis male jogger calls rhe police and John runs away likd a coward!"
...
"He can only briefly describe him as a bum sleeping on a bench, deeply into a sleep... "Sleeping and having nightmares as he is reliving his father's Guastly Deeds?:
...
"But as presented earlier...
"How could he?"
"He was a baby?:
"And, he never witnessed it?"
...
"You see, many years later...
"He finds the pictures taken by the police in his father's desk!"
...
"And, that's where we are now!"
"House at the End of the Street 2020! (D)
...
"John realizes that now there's been two murders in that park?"
"As he was sleeping?:
"Both times!"
...
"Feeling confident he had nothing to do with it...
"And, he couldn't understand why he was considered a possible threat?"
"But, there was mention on 'Action News Channel 6,' about this being a liking to a serial killer!"
"Named John Burns!"
"And, many, many, years ago...
"They showed pictures of John Burns family and John Burns Jr.!
(As a young man!).
...
"So, now he sees that his face is coming across the TV?"
"Shocked, there's an "All State Bulletin' looking for John!"
...
"What the FUCK!"
He Thinks.
"And, he knows that he has no place to stay?:
"No place to go?"
"As Detective Martin Truex is closing in!!!"
...
"So, he can't go back to the park...
"So, he gets in his car and drives around Edison...
"He finds a cheap hotel and talks to the owner...
" And, he agrees yo let John spend one night for a $20 bill."
"But, you see, he has no intentions of making any more payments?"
...
"So, he stays there for two days until the owner finally kicks him out into the cold!"
...
"And, it's right before Christmas of 2020!"
"Do, no money, no place to go, and hungry...
"He stops at the... 'Most Likely Perfect House?"
...
"He knocks on the door and a woman, living alone, greets him?"
(Is she FUCKING CRAZY?)
"He tells her his sad story that he broke down and lies!"
"And, says he needs to use her cell phone."
...
"He figures once he gets inside, he'll take advantage of her, and do like Daddy father"
...
"So, Like Father Like Son, once inside, the unsuspecting woman turns the TV on to 'Channel 6 Action News.'
"And, he doesn't notice it?"
...
"As she gracefully prepares a meal for him of turkey dinner...
(Of course it's Christmas Eve).
"She tells John that she's expecting her husband to arrive shortly."
...
"And, as she tells this to John...
"John doesn't seem to care and greedily partakes in the festivities?"
...
"She asks John if he would like a drink?"
"And, he replies most graciously...
"Yes!"
"Anything thing eill,do?"
...
"She tells him,that she expects that Her husband...
(Which there is no one).
"Will walk through the door and minute."
...
"A D she passes the Living room to the bathroom, she sees a picture of John Burns Jr. on Action News!"
...
"It's a picture of him as a young man."
"She instantly recognizes this and instead of calling the Edison Police, and tells them what was happening...
"She recalls the past...
"And, remembers John Burn's Jr."
"And, because he actually had killed...
(One of the joggers).
"And, that was her, little, sister...
...
"Yes, she recognizes the younger picture as being John and she says...
(To herself).
"THAT FUCKING BASTARD!"
"But Fanstorians...
"That second woman that was attacked was her younger sister Betty...
"But what you don't know...
"The first woman survived!"
"For the male Jogger was Surgeon!"
"And, that was FUCKING HER!!!"
...
"So, she devises a plan?"
"She goes back into the dining room and offers him a glass of iced tea which he graciously accepts?"
"And, then she goes back into the living room to again...
"Watch TV."
"Waiting patintly...
...
"And, within minutes, he starts throwing up violently?"
"Vomiting everywhere?"
...
"He calls out fir help as she comes back into the Dining Room."
...
"And, as he collapsed on the floor he cries out...
"Please, Fucking, Please call 911!"
"You mean like you did after you slaughtered my sister?"
"My younger sister?"
...
"So, now guess what I gave you and you so graciously just drank?"
...
"It was a 'Highly Toxic Potion of Tea!"
"HEMLOCK, FUCKING, TEA, LOSER!"
"And, I hope you enjoy your visit to Hell!"
"MOTHER FUCKER!!!"
The End?
Approximate Word Count 1387.




"Special thanks hoes out first to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus the Christ, followed by FanStory and Tom...
"The Administrator,
Fan Art Review, this talented....
"And, amazing artist...
"Lillibug6," and her incredible picture..
"Coming up from the grave"

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