Spiritual Flash Fiction posted September 10, 2017

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Reflective Flash Fiction


by DonandVicki

As a dull, dense fog consumed our bed, a commanding voice filled my consciousness.

"Fear not, I bring you tidings."

Startled, attempting to awake my wife, I gasped, unable to respond.

"Shhh..., only listen with your heart, this can be your blessing or bane. You shall live with your wife for eternity, one identical lifetime after the next. The same pleasures and pain."

I was finally able to communicate using my thoughts: "Should I kiss or curse you?"

"Why not start by kissing your wife."

Realizing the choice that I had to make, I kissed my wife.

The fog lifted.

100 Word Flash Fiction contest entry


Word count: 100
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