General Poetry posted August 24, 2017


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Unforgiveness

by dovemarie

When I am hurt
And treated like dirt,
Then I am unforgiving

I make other people feel bad
Because I am angry and sad,
And feel that life is not worth living

I do not forgive myself or others,
A blanket of rage that covers and smothers
It is death-like, to be unforgiving

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I Am Not Perfect writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem about a flaw that you see in yourself.


I have had so many bad things happen to me and so many mean things said to me, that I have a hard time forgiving. Thanks to cooljordan88 for artwork.
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