Romance Poetry posted July 11, 2017 Chapters: Prologue -1- 2... 


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...sometimes love is not enough

A chapter in the book The Products of Love

Good Love Gone Wrong

by Mustang Patty

                    So wonderfully sweet; the beginning,

                    The moonlight walks and soft pillow talks,

                    Ecstasy in each other's arms,

                    Powerful pull between them,

                    There's never enough time,

                    Longing for a touch,

                    Just filling time

                    Till they meet

                    again

                    Love

                 
                    Hate

                    Swearing

                    To never

                    Darken his door

                    Never speak his name

                    Escape; go far away

                    Leave the memories of love

                    Flee the temptation of his voice

                    Find a new life, a shiny new love.

                    Bury the pain; heal the wound, forget him


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thank you David Ruhl for the use of your artwork, 'Heart on Ice'

For this poem, I chose to create a Double Reversed Etheree

The poetry form, Etheree, consists of 10 lines of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 syllables. Etheree can also be reversed and written 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. Get creative and write an Etheree with more than one verse, but follow suit with an inverted syllable count.
Reversed Etheree: 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
...Triple Etheree, Quadruple Etheree, and so on!

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