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A chapter in the book My Book of Poems 2010-2017

Rainy Monchielle

by Mustang Patty



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Cold rain runs down the streets
I need my umbrella
Water on ev'ry lash
I just want to get home
Cars rush by with a splash.
 
Cold rain runs down the streets,
How long will this go on?
It's hard for me to see,
Shoes in freezing water
Why's this hap'ning to me?
 
Cold rain runs down the streets
It's just a few more blocks
These shoes I'll have to toss
My building is in sight
But, soon, I'll hit the sauce
 
Cold rain runs down the streets
I don't need Noah's ark
I'm to my door at last
Blasted winter weather
Time for heat on full blast

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The Monchielle is a poem that consists of four five-line stanzas where the first line repeats in each verse. Each line within the stanzas consist of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme. The rhyme pattern is Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml.

The Monchielle form was created by Jim T. Henriksen.

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