Romance Poetry posted June 28, 2017 Chapters:  ...17 18 -19- 20... 


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A chapter in the book My Book of Poems 2010-2017

A Katauta for the Doubter

by Mustang Patty

Why do you love me?
I am so unlovable
What can you possibly see?

 
Your soul speaks to mine
Our kindred spirits entwine
You are my everything
 
How can you see that?
Do you know the depths of me?
I am unworthy of you

 
No, my dear sweet love
Your very presence fulfills
All my desires and wants
 
So, I am the one?
Your true one and only love?
You'll stay with me forever?

 
I'm right here for you
I will not leave until called
By Him, who gave you to me.



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thanks to GaliaG for the use of this artwork which finished off the poem

The katauta is a Japanese poetic form that is actually considered an incomplete or half-poem. It's a 3-liner that follows either 5-7-5 or more commonly 5-7-7 syllables per line. Sounds like a haiku or senryu, right? But this poem is specifically addressed to a lover.
When paired together, multiple katautas act as a question and answer conversation between lovers to form sedoka. If the concept of sedoka sounds familiar, it's similar to somonka, in which 2 tankas are written as love letters.
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