General Poetry posted June 23, 2017


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Can I

by Jean Hornby


I failed before I began
I was careless
in this mapped out world

Existing beyond thoughts
Trailing limits
I captured it all

Empty planning collects
Empty dreams
Trapped by emotions
Only a battled life remains

Somewhere in the distance
A pain carries a thought
Is it over ?

There amidst the silence
All I have left is a whisper

It echoes .... Can I live my life again !




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