Romance Poetry posted April 4, 2017 Chapters:  ...19 20 -21- 22... 


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Heroic Sonnet

A chapter in the book Sonnets

Dreams to Not Remember

by michaelcahill

You've wrought dreams I hope I won't remember;
though true it is ... I've seen through blinded eyes.
You're simple greeting, I believed was splendor;
foreshadowing a lie, I'd eulogize.
 
I cannot say why simple friendship threw me.
I'm guessing love first sited loudly spoke.
The ground seemed solid to this honeybee,
but, you, my daisy, failed to see the joke.
 
I realize you hadn't one vague clue.
For all those months I'd felt insep'rable,
a cyclone that the world could not subdue--
but truth told you this man's insensible.
 
This damn-fool man saw light so bright it hurt.
(I'd altered all your words to suite my needs)
My luck-- you did not sound.a red alert,
and bid the nut house pull me from the weeds!
 
"Twas just hello, not near a thing of splendor--
I'm left with dreams I hope I don't remember.

 





Heroic Sonnet

This is an iambic pentameter based poem that adds a heroic couplet to either two Sicilian octave stanzas or four Sicilian quatrain stanzas. In other words, it's eighteen lines of iambic pentameter broken into three or five parts with the last part being a couplet. It gives the opportunity for two or more pivots, either at the octave breaks, or at at the end of each quatrain. You can really get your pivot to a spin with this form. The rhyme scheme has usually been abababab cdcdcdcd ee or abab cdcd efef ghgh ii, but there's no reason an Italian octave/quatrain envelope rhyme or other variations couldn't be used.

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