Biographical Poetry posted March 5, 2017


Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level
I'm heartbroken...we lost a beautiful soul this morning.

For Luna

by Dawn Munro

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For Luna

May angels guide your steps this night -
your path be strewn with stars,
for yours was sweetest, brightest love,
the kind no Reaper mars.

My prayer is that your journey was
like floating on a cloud,
and as you reached St. Peter's gate,
the Chorus sang aloud

with joy and jubilation,
for your Mickey met his mom.
To you, dear Jeni, this I vow --
tonight your moon's a psalm.
~~~

RIP Jennifer Smoker
March 5, 2017



Recognized


"For Luna" has already received more than 40 reviews, many of them rated "exceptional", and is now on our writing site as an All-Time Best. But I answered most of those reviews and I have decided, thanks to the incredibly kind support of people who knew Jeni through her writing, that I am going to share just a few of the reviews it has received so Jeni's family will see how much this woman's life touched others, was woven through the fabric of this writing site we shared and Jeni loved, like I do. Her family needs to see how much people here will miss her...(I wish I could copy all the reviews for you.)
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Review For For Luna

Exceptional

This is a very good ode to a wonderful poet and kind person. It is sad that she is gone but good that she is with her son again.

Joan Comment Written 07-Mar-2017 by dragonpoet
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Review For For Luna

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem in honour of Jeni. We were fans of each other's work and fascinated how our writing was progressing. It is a sorrow news to me to find out this beautiful soul is gone. I was wondering why she hasn't posted anything new for a while.
She was true, a talented writer and a wonderful person. Your poem is exquisite. With love, Ella Comment Written 07-Mar-2017 by Ella25
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Review For For Luna

Excellent

Thanks so much for writing this tribute. No matter how prepared we think we are for the passing of a loved one, it still comes as a shock, and it still hurts very deeply.
Bill~ Comment Written 07-Mar-2017 by Bill O'Bier
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Review For For Luna

Excellent

I am devastated by this news. Luna and I were fans of each others work. We reviewed and spoke often. She was a great writer and friend. I do not know what to say right now other than that I will sorely miss her. The only good thing to come out of this loss is as you wrote

"My prayer is that your journey was
like floating on a cloud,
and as you reached St. Peter's gate,
the Chorus sang aloud
with joy and jubilation,
for your Mickey met his mom."

I am glad they are united.

Thank you for sharing the sad news with your loving tribute to a dear friend. Comment Written 07-Mar-2017 by Sis Cat
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Review For For Luna

Excellent

I would always review Jeni's poems. I am very sad to learn through your poem that she has passed on. I was having some medical problems that a times diverted my attention and had not fully realized what had happened. Now she is reunited with her son Mickey and I will pray that they will frolicking with the Angels above. This is a wonderful tribute to her, Dawn,,,,,,Jim Comment Written 06-Mar-2017 by Jim Lorson Sr
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Review For For Luna

Exceptional

Sometimes when you don't see postings from a favorite poet, you assume that person is just not active on the site anymore. So, I appreciate your poem acknowledging how her poems and her spirit touched her readers and how she shared more than words--she shared much of her self. Comment Written 07-Mar-2017 by mvbrooks
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Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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