Writing Poetry posted March 1, 2017 Chapters: -Prologue- 1... 


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My first try at a rictameter

A chapter in the book My Book of Poems 2010-2017

The Dark

by Mustang Patty

Darkness
Overcomes me
My heart is filled with dread
Little comfort, no end in sight
Is it too much to ask for just some light?
Clouds came in blocking the bright sun
Cold heart filled with sadness
Alone in the
Darkness



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A rictameter has 9 lines with a syllable count of 2,4,6,8,10,8,6,4,2 with the last line's word/s identical to the first line (Rhyming not needed)
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