| General Fiction posted February 4, 2017 |
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Who gets to go with?
I Love You More (100 word challenge)
by jusylee72
Which one of you will I take?"
Daddy was being playful.
"Should I take the youngest with the curly hair?"
We circled around him, the three of us. He pretended to grab for us as he addressed us, one at a time.
"Or should it be my only boy?" Brother Billy stepped back laughing at his Father's foolishness.
"Or maybe, my oldest child, Jessica, just because?" Daddy loved to rhyme.
"Me, Daddy, I love you more!"
It had only been one week since Daddy died.
But Mommy took away my knife.
She had always hated me.
"Later, Daddy."
"Soon."
scare me writing prompt entry
Which one of you will I take?"
Daddy was being playful.
"Should I take the youngest with the curly hair?"
We circled around him, the three of us. He pretended to grab for us as he addressed us, one at a time.
"Or should it be my only boy?" Brother Billy stepped back laughing at his Father's foolishness.
"Or maybe, my oldest child, Jessica, just because?" Daddy loved to rhyme.
"Me, Daddy, I love you more!"
It had only been one week since Daddy died.
But Mommy took away my knife.
She had always hated me.
"Later, Daddy."
"Soon."
Daddy was being playful.
"Should I take the youngest with the curly hair?"
We circled around him, the three of us. He pretended to grab for us as he addressed us, one at a time.
"Or should it be my only boy?" Brother Billy stepped back laughing at his Father's foolishness.
"Or maybe, my oldest child, Jessica, just because?" Daddy loved to rhyme.
"Me, Daddy, I love you more!"
It had only been one week since Daddy died.
But Mommy took away my knife.
She had always hated me.
"Later, Daddy."
"Soon."
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Writing Prompt Scare me in 100 words; give or take one. In an opening paragraph, employ the senses of sight and sound or the lack thereof, to paint your picture. No music or graphics. Artwork ok. |
I always learn so much when I have a limited amount of words. I loved this challenge.
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