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A chapter in the book Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author

haiku suite (goldfish)

by Sis Cat

1)

submerged maple leaves
blanket fish pond's bottom
pickled autumn

2)

beneath withered tree
thin goldfish nibble algae
hurry mosquitoes

3)

seen through cold drizzle
goldfish glint and glitter
sunken treasures



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I crafted my haiku from my observations of a church goldfish pond. Each haiku can stand alone or together. Each contains seasonal references--kigo words--for winter.

Image courtesy of Linda Engel

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