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free verse

A chapter in the book Patterns

Lovers

by estory

The author has placed a warning on this post for sexual content.
The lovers of music,
The lovers of the music of love songs
Playing over and over
On the radios

The lovers of poetry
Reciting their love poems
In front of their mirrors

The lovers of art in love
With the nudes in the paintings
Hanging in the boudoirs of the palaces in Paris,
The figures in the statues
Contorted into all those shapes

The lovers of love,
The arts of love,
The women and the men
In love with the shapes in their hands
And the flavors in their mouths,
Ginger and chocolate and vanilla flavors
Rolling off the tongue
In curliques

The lovers of servants,
The servants who go down on their hands and knees
And give up their souls,
Every inch of their bodies

And the lovers of taskmasters,
Those stern taskmasters
Who bind up love
In the darkness,
And teach it new tricks

The lovers behind closed doors, sitting alone in their rooms,
Loving themselves as nobody ever loved them before

And the moment when love seems to leave us,
Empty handed,
With nothing to say




this is a minimalist free verse piece, in which the music is constructed out of repetitions of "love' in various evolving forms, with an ear to shorter and longer threads of language and dramatic pauses, and images. It sort of rings hollow, intentionally, as a comment on the underlying feelings beneath the excitement.
Today we seem to be caught up with appearances, with sensations, and a good measure of self indulgence, and this contrasts with what love is really all about. like many of my poems, it underwent several rewrites, until reaching its current form. estory
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