Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted July 31, 2016


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When you feel the betrayal...

The Change

by LoannaLois

At the first painful realization that all was not well
I wept
but always the optimist
I knew I could fix
whatever was not right

At second light, I was more able to recognize my denial
I wept
but wanted now to find truth
I became watchful

The third time was no charm
I wept and started free-falling
Into Grace...
There was no fourth time

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Betrayal writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem in any form or style with Betrayal as the central theme.
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Often the betrayal is in fact the final gift.
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