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Poetry Potlatch - Free Verse on the Myth of the Wind

A chapter in the book Poetry Potlatch Pieces

A Tribal Tale

by ~Dovey


Invisible beauty
in the realm of Gaia -
Perspective of power
presented in the intangible
interactions of a gracious
yet formidable
Goddess


Heed her daughter, Gale -
The most tempestuous
of Gaia's offspring,
delightful or destructive
at her own whim -
Unpredictable

Pondering
Gale's pleasure is a warm breeze -
Butterflies float in wordless perfection
leaves rustle, rubbing each other in affection
next to a murmuring mountain stream
the pulse of the forest is calm.
Birds twitter
contented conversation
communicating love -
Her caress is silent,
gentle on my cheek
Like my grandmother's kiss -
Reassuring

Seasons change -
Her breath grows cool.
I wonder what I've done
to draw the reprimand
of her icy tongue
lashing at me unmercifully
in an acerbic, Arctic blast.
I did not heed the warnings
of snowfall and darkness.
Persistent in my willfulness,
I would not be
pent in by frigid
infringement on my freedoms -
I ventured foolishly

I now yield to the realization --
Gale's power is infinite.
Invisible in her interactions,
yet, all powerful in her realm.
The chants of the elders
meander through my mind
like leaden footsteps
leaving a lasting impression.
Revere and respect
that which you cannot see.
Epiphany

Her displeasure is dynamic --
whirling out of control
in dust clouds of destruction
debilitating all in her path.
Unequivocal fury

Awaiting deliverance from my
own irresponsibility and obstinacy
I contemplate rescue -
Seeking protection
from her reproach
at the base of a
stalwart Spruce -
I dream once again
of Gale's kiss
upon my cheek -
I'm humbled



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In this week's Poetry Potlatch we were challenged by Phyllis Stewart to create a "Myth of the Wind". Mine is the imagined tale of a headstrong girl learning to respect the words of her elders and the forces of nature.

This headstrong author reserved the right to limited punctuation and unorthodox capitalization in honor of Gale's unpredictability ;)

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