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A rondeau

A chapter in the book Christine's Poems

I wish I Could

by Chrissy710

I wish I could, a life create
with peace and joy; no signs of hate.
Where only kindness would be found
and we could all live safe and sound.
Just start again clean off the slate.

A happiness would radiate
across the earth; each man elate.
Fill every heart with love abound.
I wish I could

Or have I left my run too late
and must I leave man to his fate.
My simple dream would be profound
a better life for all around.
I wish I could.





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My first attempt at a Rondeau, thanks to Robyn Corums post 'This Sunny Child '( please read) and her invitation from Joy Graham : Rondeau marathon challenge this weekend

Cheers Robyn and Joy

I thought I would give it a try so feedback would be appreciated

Thanks to Stephen Wigmore for the lovely image Peace

Thanks for reading my work
Cheers Christine
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