Children Poetry posted March 14, 2016

patcelaw

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Clickity, Clack, Click, Clack

by patcelaw

In
my purple
dress that day I was bored
so I drew the stick across the fence.
As I dragged it, it made sweet music to my ears
Clickity, clickity, click, clack, click
To me it was such fun
starting to
dance
*
Now
with no care
I was no longer bored.
Clickity, clickity clack, click clack
I was having such fun holding on to my stick.
Click, clack, click , clack, click, clickety, clack
That was me having fun
me and my
stick
-Patricia Lawrence
3-14-16

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syllable count each stanza is 1,3,6,9,12,9,6,3,1

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Picture this challenge 3-14-16

Clickity, Clack, Click, Clack

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