Satire Non-Fiction posted February 29, 2016

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Satirical One sided phone conversation

Hello God ?

by DonandVicki

One Sided Conversation Contest Winner 

Hello God?
How did you know my name? Caller I.D.?
Oh yeah right you're God,
Anyway I just wanted to thank you
for answering my prayer.
... ... ...
Right, I know it's no big deal for you,
Parting the Red Sea, Loaves and fishes and all.
... ...
Right, Right.
Sure I will keep it short,
I know you are a busy Man

... ...
OR Woman, I always wondered
about that possibility.
... ...
Sure, sure, hey wait
I thought you lived outside of time?
... ...
Right, I won't push it.
You are most welcome. Any way,
I just want to thank you for giving me the strength
to give up drinking and giving my wife the strength
to stick with me, I want to dedicate the rest of my life
to making her happy, she deserves it.
... ...
Well thank you God but she deserves it more
and I want to thank you for her being my wife,
I am truly blessed.
... ...
And God bless you as well.
Wait, Can you bless yourself?
Oh yeah right, you are God.


Writing Prompt
Write a one-sided phone conversation. Use ... to represent the unheard speaker. No quotation marks are necessary.

One Sided Conversation
Contest Winner


Thank you God, Giving up alcohol was the hardest thing but losing my wife would have been so much harder. Thank you Lord for giving me the light.
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