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A Couplet Sonnet

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Yellow Lilies

by Treischel



These lilies add their golden glow
Wherever their bright petals show.
Their stamens lift to taste the air.
as petals open wide to share
The pollen with the bugs and bees.
Their bulbous roots can help appease
The culinary Asian taste.
They look delightful in a vase.
But, lily colors we most prize,
Delighting visions in our eyes.
That's why we love to cultivate
Them, for the mood that they create.

These lilies add their golden glow
Wherever their bright petals show.







These yellow lilies are in my brother Richard's back yard. They were so vibrant that I just had to photograph them. In the poem I made reference to the fact that, in Asia, they eat the roots as a vegetable. A yellow lily usually represents joy or gaeity. They are the flower of the 40th anniversary.

This is a Couplet Sonnet.
A Couplet Sonnet is made up of 7 rhyming couplets. The unique feature is that the first two lines are also the last two lines, so the rhyme scheme is:
AAbbccddeeff AA, where the capital letters indicate the repeated lines. I did this one in iambic tetrameter.

This photograph was taken by the author himself on Saturday, July 11, 2015, at my brother, Richard, and his wife, Corinne's, 40th Anniversery party.
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