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A Crown of Heroic Sonnets

A chapter in the book Minnesota Poems

Minnesota Early Explorers -1600s

by Treischel



1. Pre-European

Land known for its lakes, but river defined,
The wilderness broached by paddles and oars,
As new land is now revealed to mankind,
Broad waterways opened up unexplored shores.

From the beginning, 'twas land that was blessed
With forests where many animals roam
And fish-filled waters for anglers to test.
A place indigenous peoples called home.

The Black Duck, makers of effigy mounds,
Have lived and prospered for nine thousand years.
Their sacred lands and tribal hunting grounds
Contain their ancient arrowheads and spears.

Then came Ojibwa, Cherokee, and Sioux,
To gather the moose, hare, beaver and bear,
The turtles, wolves, and the buffalo too.
All there for taking as food, use, or care.

These various cultures waged wars, yet thrived
Before the Europeans first arrived


2. Great Lakes Exploration

Before the Europeans first arrived
The natives lived by custom, wits and chance.
The legends of contact rumors survived -
Maybe the Vikings, but certainly France.

The French were already in Canada,
The St. Lawrence River, had founded Quebec,
And had brave explorers with stamina,
To go on any adventurous trek.

Among the first, Etienne Brule,
Who followed the St. Lawrence River trace.
He sailed the Great Lakes, where Indians say
The sacred Great Spirit founded their race.

Then De LaSalle sailed along shoreline banks
With Hennepin, to seek a passage north.
They built a boat out of wooden planks.
The "Griffon" named, it quickly sallied forth.

They soon encountered huge Niagara Falls.
So noted, in Hennepin's diary scrawls.



3. Northern Mississippi River Discovery

So noted, in Hennepin's diary scrawls.
Just one of many appear in his book.
LaSalle sent him on, while he built fort walls,
In hopes to give Mississippi a look.

With two companions in birch-bark canoe,
The three set off into the vast unknown
Down Illinois River. They found it too!
That mighty river had finally shown.

He claims he sailed to Gulf of Mexico,
Then all the way back to Minnesota.
Historians argue, "Where did he go?"
He was detained for years by Dakota.

The Sioux kept him captive, traveled with them.
He saw it, and named St. Anthony falls.
Today it's a Minneapolis gem.
Back then, an item his memoir recalls.

The most famous facts historians draw --
Two North American falls that he saw.


4. Duluth Makes Way for Fur Traders

Two North American falls that he saw
Became his most notable legacy.
Remember, he's under his captive's paw
And needed release from captivity?

Well, that fact's this tale's most notable truth.
Then from the garrison at Montreal
Comes Daniel Graysolon, Sieur Du Lhut
To negotiate Hennepin's recall.

He was an intrepid interpreter,
Negotiated many Indian truce,
Superior's new fortress outfitter,
His treaties set northern fur traders loose.

They settled the region, married within
The chief's blessings, the women of the tribes.
A brand new culture, the Meti, begin
To live among them, as record describes.

And so we find cultural unity,
A French and Indian community.


5. The French Claim

A French and Indian community
That lasted until other nations came.
'Twas culture blended with impunity,
Without a bit self-consciousness or shame.

The upper river was mapped by Marquette,
La Salle, for France, declared a large land claim,
The whole Mississippi basin was set
To become a part of French King's domain.

"New France" was what this area was called,
But map creators named it for the King,
So Louis XIV's name was installed.
"Louisiana" had a better ring.

Now, while all this claiming was going on,
The priest explorers mapped, wrote, taught and held
Their services, in spots they came upon.
Their knowledge of peoples and regions swelled.

The priests were transcribing America
Within its vast uncharted area.



6. The Voyageurs

Within its vast uncharted area
Was land Minnesota finally became.
Where waterways with the criteria
Have beavers that brought voyageur acclaim.

Through woods, streams, and lakes, they'd paddle all day
And portaged with large canoes on their backs
In the pristine BWCA.
Their legends live in historical tracts.

The Sixteen Hundreds were the eras when
The Frenchman thrived in forests and on lakes.
There weren't many towns or forts back then.
They lived on the wild paths that nature takes.

Respecting people and environment,
The fur-traders and the bold voyageurs,
Who opened ways for future settlement
Followed the lead of those first explorers.

That type of person was never content
To live anywhere but teepee or tent.

7. Legacy

To live anywhere but teepee or tent,
Where wind rules the waves in the bays,
They traveled the rivers, the lakes, these men
Who left their marks where their influence stays.

Along with others who much later came
To search Minnesota's interior
A Wisconsin river bears Brule's name.
Its rapids flow into Superior.

You'll see Hennepin in many a place
Nearby St. Anthony's falls, that he named,
And Father Marquette's names frequently grace
Those charts in parts that his trip maps proclaimed.

And Daniel Greysolon, don't forsooth
His role exploring the unknown Great Lakes.
His name recalled in the Port Town, Duluth,
A fit reward for his journey's high stakes.

All brave men who traveled water to find
Land known for its lakes, but river defined.

Minnesota.



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This poem is about the early explorers of the region that later became Minnesota.

1620's

Etienne Brule (born in France)
Fur Trader/Explorer; Brule is credited as being the first European travel past the St Lawrence River and to reach Lake Superior in 1622-23. Some historians believe that he may have reached the end of the lake, (present day Duluth).

1670's

Louis Joliet (born in Quebec City, Canada) and Father Jacques Marquette (born in France)
In 1673 Joliet (Fur Trader) and Father Jacques Marquette (French Jesuit missionary) were the first to reach and map the northern portion of the Mississippi River. They traveled about halfway down the Mississippi to about Arkansas, but turned back to avoid capture by the Spanish who were in the southern part of this territory.

Daniel Greysolon, Sieur du Lhut
In 1678, reached the interior of Minnesota, but returned to Lake Superior, then traveled up the northwest shore to build a post on the Kaministiquia River, near Thunder Bay. In 1679 he met with Dakota Indians near Lake Mille Lacs, and returned in 1682 to negotiate the release of Father Hennepin from captivity.

Father Louis Hennepin (born in the Netherlands)
In 1679, Hennepin sailed with Robert de LaSalle from Canada through the Great Lakes aboard Le Griffon to explore the unknown West. In 1680 they reached the mouth of the Illinois River. La Salle sent Father Hennepin northward on the Mississippi to explore the area now known as Minnesota. Hennepin is the first to discover St. Anthony Falls. He was captured by a band of Dakota Sioux. He was held captive for a couple of years and traveled with this nomadic people as they moved about the region. After his release, he journeyed with Geysolon back to Montreal. Then he returned to France, where he published several books about his journeys. Some historians believe he exagerated many facts.

Robert de LaSalle (Rene-Robert Cavelier, Sieur de La Salle, born in Rouen, France)
French explorer; In 1682, La Salle claimed the entire Mississippi River basin for France, a huge area that included modern day Minnesota. Source: Minnesota Fun Facts and Trivia.

Details:
The Kensington Runestone - an artifact found in Minnesota that is believed by many to be of Viking origin. Historians have challenged its authenticity.

The Erie Canal was later built to connect the St. Lawrence River to Lake Erie. St. Lawrence river was portaged (walked) in the early days to gain access to the Great Lakes.

When De LaSalle made his exploration, they walked the portage, then felled trees and built the boat that he christened "The Griffon". A Griffon is a mythical beast, part lion and part eagle, that was part of his family's coat-of-arms.

BWCA - Boundary Waters Canoe Area, is a vast region in northern Minnesota and Canada that contains hundreds of lakes with short and long portages between them, so that by using them, hundreds of miles can be traversed. By traveling by river, lake and stream a person can actually go from Hudson's Bay in Canada, all the way to the Gulf of Mexico, in a canoe.

Meti - the children of Indian and French people resulting from mixed marriages.

This poem is a Crown of Heroic Sonnets:
A Crown of Heroic Sonnets is a sequence of seven sonnets, usually addressed to some one person, and concerned with a single theme. However, instead of having the usual 12 lines with closing couples for a total of 14 lines, a Heroic Sonnet has either two octaves with closing couplets or 4 quatrains with closing couplets for a total of 18 lines. Each of the Sonnets explores one aspect of the theme, and is linked to the preceding and succeeding Sonnets by repeating the final line of the preceding Sonnet as the first line of the succeeding Sonnet. The first line of the first Sonnet is repeated as the final line of the last and final Sonnet, thereby bringing the sequence to a circular close.
Written in iambic pentameter, no rhyme is to be repeated, except those of the repeated lines.
The rhyme scheme is to be either:
abababab--cdcdcdcd--ee (using octaves),

or:
abab--cdcd--efef--ghgh--ii (using quatrains).

Some feminine and Anapestic meter unavoidably crept into a few lines. However, I feel the flow remained in tact. The majority of the lines remain iambic pentameter.

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