Fantasy Poetry posted March 13, 2015 Chapters:  ...44 45 -46- 47... 


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Trimeter Quatrains

A chapter in the book Minnesota Poems

Pancake Ice

by Treischel



Pancake ice is forming
On beaches, in the shoals.
Waves begin transforming
Where swirling current rolls.

Slushy mix of liquid,
Prepared by Nature's touch.
Flapjacks that are frigid
Would make a lousy lunch.

Waves provide the syrup.
The table is the shore.
Fascinating set up
For winter gods of yore.

Not meant for the timid,
Or so the story goes.
Breakfast for intrepid
Legendary heroes.

Paul Bunyan resided
In northern woods domain.
Some think he decided
To eat this with champagne.

Very hearty breakfast
For hungry lumberjack.
A meal that's sure to last,
'Til hunger pangs come back.

This was oft' repeated
Within the lake's cool breeze.
Paul gets overheated
When chopping down the trees.

This cool and crunchy meal
Is not for everyone,
But it helps to congeal
The sweat of Paul Bunyan.





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The ice shown here is known as pancake ice, because it looks like pancakes. I haven't seen it other places, but it is likely in Anticartica, Alaska and Canada. They may have it. Pancake ice is formed by strong wave and current action in freezing waters.

Paul Bunyan is a mythical giant lumberjack who, along with a giant Blue Ox named Babe, is credited with many tall tale adventures. There are many stories and even books about their antics. His footprints are said to have formed Minnesota's 10,000 lakes. Dragging his enormous axe dug out the Mississippi. He could cut down 100 trees with one swing of his Axe. His sweat filled up the Great Lakes. Many more tales are told. If you are interested in more. Google him. His stories are known as tall tales (get it?). Here is one of mine.

This poem was written in Trimeter (6 syllables) quatrains with abab rhyming.

This picture was taken by the author himself in March, 2013, just outside of Duluth, Minnesota.
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