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A chapter in the book Minnesota Poems

Minnehaha Mist

by Treischel



Take me down to water's edge,
way down,
to smell the spume,
see the mist,
watch it
flowing past
so fast.

Oh mighty falls of Minnehaha,
bless us with your
roaring thunder,
splashing sounds
on
sacred stones
to sing your
ancient song.

We will gather in your mystic majesty,
to gaze
amazed
at
violent torrents
that
ripple wildly,
while
wanton waves
keep
flowing past.

Your cascade carved this deep depression,
chasm,
cauldron,
canal,
through the forest,
through mud and rock,
to force
clear water
down its channel,
long before
we came along.

Your cascade claims the Mississippi
as it
rapidly rushes
to join
in marriage,
its mighty mate
and
finally meet.

We sing your praises, oh wild water
while
gawking,
gazing,
in groups
that gather at
your feet.

We pray, may your waters
flow
forever.
Forever,
FOREVER.






Minnehaha Falls cascades into a chasm that it formed eons ago. It is located in Minneapolis, just 5 minutes from the Minneapolis/St. Paul Internatrional Airport (MSP). The creek flows into the Mississippi River about a half mile down stream from here. Tourists can reach this spot below the falls from three directions. Weddings are frequently performed on the bridges above or below it.

This poem was written in a Free Style format.
A Free Style Poem is a subset of Free Verse. It has no rhyme scheme, tempo, or meter pattern. It just flows with the words. The author adds dimension in how the poem is felt, through the use of pace and pause, created in how the words are arranged on the page. The distinction between Free Style and Free Verse is that Free Style contains some rhyme while Free Verse does not. It rhymes in places as the author wants, but not necessarily consistently.

In this poem, I tried to make each stanza a little replica of a waterfall.

This photograph was taken by the author on May 6, 2011.
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