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A Catena Rondo

A chapter in the book Minnesota Poems

Frozen River Basin

by Treischel



The Mississippi River basin, frozen in the ice,
It's showing signs of melting as the water starts to pool.
The Ides of March are turning now, but it's still very cool,
The Mississippi River basin, frozen in the ice.

It's showing signs of melting as the water starts to pool.
The town around is bounded in a frozen winter scene.
The buildings and the bridges, that are looking so serene,
Present idyllic images resembling Christmas yule.

The town around is bounded in a frozen winter scene.
At dusk, to be highlighted by a pastel painted sky
Where pink and purple color hues are dominated by.
Frost fixes climate as the filtered air is brisk and clean.

At dusk, to be highlighted by a pastel painted sky
So cold, the stack belched smoke becomes suspended in the air.
Which paints a picture winter-made that's way beyond compare,
With lots of fancy lampposts that the roads are lighted by.

So cold, the stack belched smoke becomes suspended in the air.
This chilly channel sweeps around and travels through St. Paul,
Where, once the Ice is melted, riverboats begin to call,
To ship its cargo down to New Orleans and everywhere.

This chilly channel sweeps around and travels through St. Paul.
The Mississippi River basin, frozen in the ice,
Is, even in the winter, a hometown that's really nice,
With heated skyways linking buildings in the urban sprawl.

The Mississippi River basin, frozen in the ice,
It's showing signs of melting as the water starts to pool.
The season's hold is shifting where these frosty spirits rule
The Mississippi River basin, frozen in the ice.





A winter scene of the Mississippi River basin around St. Paul, Minnesota. Downtown St. Paul is not in this particular frame. It is out of sight to the right of the picture. The highbridge is shown in the background linking the bluffs of St. Paul proper with West St. Paul. The smoke is coming from the power plant. St. Paul has sandstone bluffs all around it. I'm standing on one, Dayton's Bluff, where I shot this picture.

This poem is a Catena Rondo.
Catena Rondo is a stanzaic form created by 20th century Canadian educator, author and poet, Robin Skelton that uses interlinked repeating lines. The form lends itself to a longer poem because of the repetition of lines. Written in any number of 3 or more quatrains made up of 2 rhymed lines enveloping a rhymed couplet (enveloping rhyme). The second line of each stanza then becomes a link to the next stanza by becoming the first line of that stanza.
Meter is at the discretion of the poet. The verses are rhymed.
The rhyme scheme is:
ABbA BCcb CDdc DEed etc ...
until the enveloped couplet of the penultimate (second to last) quatrain repeats Line1 of the poem as line 2, thereby bringing the final quatrain back to the original scheme of the 1st quatrain ABbA.
So,in this scenario, the only line of the last stanza that could be original is Line 3 since Line 1, Line 2 and Line 4 are repetitions of the same lines of the first stanza.

This picture was taken by the author himself from Mounds Park on March 3, 2011.



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