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A Freud Poem

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Abused?

by Treischel



A father's belt
Leaving welts
Impressions

Punishment
Laid down heavy
Not forgot

Yesterday's
Common rule
Now abuse







I certainly got my share of welts while growing up. I survived and learned my lessons. Things have changed.

This is a Freud Poem.
A "Freud" was developed by Fanstorian, 'ann marie mazz'.

The rules are:
Three syllables per line
Three lines per stanzas
Three stanza limit
Rhyming is optional
The theme must contain a state of mind.

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