General Poetry posted November 27, 2013


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The Beach is where I'm at in this poem

Heaven on Earth

by Brooklyn68

Waves break on the shore (5)

Getting sand between your toes (7)

Here, heaven on earth! (5)



5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry


This is my first type of poetry written in this form.
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