General Poetry posted October 23, 2013 | Chapters: | ...96 97 -98- 99... |
A Lune Poem
A chapter in the book Little Poems
Showing Colors
by Treischel
Blowing in the wind
colors show in grains and Glory |
This picture inspired this poem
Flying the flag is also known as "Showing the colors".
The nickname for the flag of the USA is "Old Glory".
This poem is a Lune.
The Lune is also known as the American Haiku. It was first created by the poet Robert Kelly and was a result of Kelly's frustration with English haiku. After much experimentation, he settled on a 13-syllable, self-contained poem that has 5 syllables in the first line, 3 syllables in the second line and 5 syllable in the final line.
Unlike haiku, there are no other rules. No need for a cutting word. Rhymes are fine; subject matter is open. While there are less syllables to use, this form has a little more freedom.
The photograph was taken by the author on the Valley Creek Bridge going over I494 in Woodbury, MN.
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and 2 member cents. Flying the flag is also known as "Showing the colors".
The nickname for the flag of the USA is "Old Glory".
This poem is a Lune.
The Lune is also known as the American Haiku. It was first created by the poet Robert Kelly and was a result of Kelly's frustration with English haiku. After much experimentation, he settled on a 13-syllable, self-contained poem that has 5 syllables in the first line, 3 syllables in the second line and 5 syllable in the final line.
Unlike haiku, there are no other rules. No need for a cutting word. Rhymes are fine; subject matter is open. While there are less syllables to use, this form has a little more freedom.
The photograph was taken by the author on the Valley Creek Bridge going over I494 in Woodbury, MN.
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