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A Free Style Poem

A chapter in the book Family

To Catch a Train

by Treischel

To Catch a Train
(A Free Style Poem)




The cinders
scramble at my feet,
along the iron track,

With ties
spread out in measures made
to upset my youthful gait,

While
Buddies heckle at my back.

As train rolls in
along the curve
that slows it to
a pace for which
fools would wait,

I charge off reaching
for the cars
that clatter by
in endless rows.

I hasten to my fate!

Before black engine gathers steam,
and the piercing whistle blows,
I race to match the pace
of traffic flow ,
and strain to hop that train.

But then,
just as the burnished handle,
beside the open car,
brushes against
my finger tip,
while I stretch to catch
a purchase on the bar,

At my fastest power burst
my footings slip

and then

I trip.





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When I was young and stupid I would do this with some buddies. We'd wait under a bridge at a curve where the train slowed down. Hop it. Ride about a mile. Then either walk back, or catch one going the other way. Teenage boys do dangerous things. Hopefully they survive.

This is a Free Style poem. Like a Free Verse poem, it has no formal structure, but it does carry rhyme in unusual manners.

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