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A Shadorma Poem

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Bursting Forth

by Treischel

Bursting Forth
(A Shadorma Poem)



Burst of Green
As new leaves come forth
Tinted hues
Earth renewed
Naked branches clothed again
Trees back in splendor







I get excited when I see the new leaves bursting out of their buds and starting to form full grown leaves. The Promise of Spring is underway.

This poen is a Shadorma.
A Shadorma is a Spanish format of a non-rhyming poem with a fixed format of syllable count. The count must be: 3/5/3/3/7/5. With that count, it is Spanish cousin to the Japanese Haiku or Senryu with their 3/5/3 and 5/7/5 structures.
The format gives a lovely pattern of flow and spurts.

This photograph is the Author's own. It was taken in April 2012.
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