Romance Poetry posted March 12, 2013


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When a girl falls in love at the first sight.

Love at first sight

by savi17

Heroic was his first look,
wind swept him away, what it took?
Oh! He took my heart.

Next was not sure fate,
My heart not in a good state.
Beating like a fierce drum.

All in my dreams soon,
Alone I was talking to the moon.
Is he feeling the same?

I Saw heaven all around,
First in the morning,him I found.
He smiled like the sun.

Took my hand in his,
pulled out the ring,What a bliss.
How could I say no?



5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry


It expresses the love at first sight with a person who also fell in the same thing.
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