Humor Poetry posted January 14, 2013


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For someone who you love not by yourside

How I feel without you

by edelyn rayo

Without you Baby I'm just like a tree without leaves
I'm just like a warrior without shelves
I'm just like a sea without fishes
Teardrops falling but splashes

Without you I am just like a chocolate with no sweet
You gave a beautiful dress, but it can't fit
I have new shoes but without socks
Beautiful melody but can make me shocks

I am just like strawberry but taste like Orange
Has Bugatti type car But don't drive coz its strange
Like a troll in warcraft but has no long range
Like a majestry spray but everyminute change

Promises ring still on my finger
Smell of your perfume why still linger
I look sorrounding you know what I see?
I'm wondering why its only color gray

Dancing in the dark without rythm
Got a wet frame but its remain the same
No one can hear my singing Loudly
Turn my head why the deaf listening to me

If ever I'm with you I am like a stars more brighting
If ever I'm with you,I'm just like diamond shining
If ever I'm with you,all my life is so amazing
If ever I'm with you ,You are just my breathing



5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry


I just made this through my imagination becoz now adays more people are far away with there love one.
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