Biographical Poetry posted December 29, 2012 | Chapters: | 3 4 -5- 6... |
Take this Pain
A chapter in the book Family
A Prayer
by Treischel
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My wife has had dibilitating back pain since 2005 for which we've tried everything. Some days are better than others. today is a bad day. I can only comfort and pray.
Note that during the Agony in the Garden, Jesus asked God to take this cup from him, meaning his suffering to come at the crucifixioihn,
I put together this format. It has a enveloping rhyme scheme of abcddcba, and syllable count of 10-9-8-7-7-8-9-10
Thanks to Bertodi of use of his artwork, My Back.
Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. Note that during the Agony in the Garden, Jesus asked God to take this cup from him, meaning his suffering to come at the crucifixioihn,
I put together this format. It has a enveloping rhyme scheme of abcddcba, and syllable count of 10-9-8-7-7-8-9-10
Thanks to Bertodi of use of his artwork, My Back.
Artwork by Renate-Bertodi at FanArtReview.com
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