Biographical Poetry posted December 29, 2012 Chapters: 3 4 -5- 6... 


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Take this Pain

A chapter in the book Family

A Prayer

by Treischel


My lover's in pain for which I cannot heal!
If a kiss could heal one broken back,
I'd kiss it 'til the sun comes up
And the aching pain was gone,
But still it goes on and on.
If God would only pass this cup,
And grant this healing that we lack.
I'd pay twice Heaven's price for this appeal!




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My wife has had dibilitating back pain since 2005 for which we've tried everything. Some days are better than others. today is a bad day. I can only comfort and pray.

Note that during the Agony in the Garden, Jesus asked God to take this cup from him, meaning his suffering to come at the crucifixioihn,


I put together this format. It has a enveloping rhyme scheme of abcddcba, and syllable count of 10-9-8-7-7-8-9-10

Thanks to Bertodi of use of his artwork, My Back.
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Artwork by Renate-Bertodi at FanArtReview.com

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