Self Improvement Poetry posted February 18, 2012

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Hear my plea

Mrs.. Nobody

by Dutchie

Mrs. Nobody

It haunted me since I was young
Nobody heard my voice
Somewhere between is where I belong
No chance to make a choice

I'm the invisible woman, personified
and I write with invisible ink
I'm doomed to be classified 
As the weakest link

Asked for help and some support
But feedback is so scarce
Despite all my work and all effort
The result just seems a farce

If readers don't like simplicity
Should I stop then and just quit
And close all this with dignity
While thinking: this was it


I write with pleasure. It is not easy to write in English, but I tried, hoping to receive useful feed back.Five reviewers give me feedback.I wondered; is my English too bad? Are people afraid to tell me what's wrong? I don't know...
If I receive 8 or 9 reviews, is it still worth to write? I have my doubts. Messages on my profile page were never read, so I don't place them anymore. Do I continue or do I quit????
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

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