General Poetry posted February 2, 2012 | Chapters: | -Prologue- 1... |
create with me
A chapter in the book Scribed Relief
Fluid Notions
by Jewell McChesney
There are poets who dip in live wells
Where life, light, and darkness abide Scribing with meaning, torrential; when seen, moisten soil of deep minds. Does this well rest beneath oceans, beseeching the deep's calming peace? Does knowing emerge in whirlpools spinning thoughts 'til given release? We glide in rivers of comfort or dive to find treasures held deep, Seeking of knowledge comes easy; Epiphany, victor's beseech. Treasures are buried within you, Revelation rests to be sought. It's in you and me, it's in others to flow within oneness of thought. |
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