General Poetry posted December 14, 2011


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scary things

3 different poetic forms.

by robina1978


Poems again given out.
Classroom assignment poetic devices in the class Rhyme and Meter in Poetry
I

The rapist

A dark tree with big bare branches
is following her everywhere
On the streets, opposite her front door
and then in her home
searching for her in the bedroom
To embrace, rape and finally kill
Nobody stopped the tree

II

The best kiss ever

Numerous, uncountable boyfriend I had
before I found the love of my life
Soon our kisses were the best ever
The longest one has seen or heard of
They are in The Guinness Book of Records
It's true, just check it
This is love forever and more

III

The cloud

A cloud surrounds me
Guides me wherever I go
It's soft and gentle
Protects me from all harm
It must be you my love
Can only be you



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