General Poetry posted November 1, 2011


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Plea

Sand Castles

by RoonilWazlib

Against the fierce waves
those sand castles remain slaves..
Tides melt them away

Wish in time will stand..
Hopes the sea could understand.
weak as they may be..

the sunset glowed bright..
Like it welcomes the dark night..
Castles are no more..

deep in sea they rest..
but remembered they are blessed..
for once, they're onshore






5-7-5 Poetry contest entry


i dont know if this is right.
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