General Poetry posted August 11, 2011


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a poem addressing life issues

poverty the brother of shame

by pip

too good to be real
is getting a good sweet meal
when a man is poor

having no money
implies having no honey
as well as no friends

a man who is poor
is trampled upon like floors
and seen as a shame

neglected by all
frustrated, despised in all
looking for a lend

help them if you can
and you will gain many barns
so is the life game





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5-7-5 Poetry contest entry


poverty is a disease that need to be treated
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